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the way she looked at me. by ~shadowofsweetwords:iconshadowofsweetwords:



the way she looked at me. eyes of deep blue, looking me eye to eye not caring for any of it.
seeing right though all the hate, all the torment that lay befor my true soul.
she said how did you come to fall in love with me. someone wicked, someone who is crewl to the touch. i said in response.

your mind is wicked your touch is crewl but you soul is pure. your speech  is light filled with truth. a voice light as a feather.

her eyes filled with a new light. but the words she spoke could never match. how can you see so deep, touch so sweetly, yet never hold love for them.

i looked back seeing so much more, so much less, what i never thought id see, things i never wanted to.

as we looked eye to eye for maybe the last time i never felt so hurt, so over joyed, never felt so alive or even that happy. to know she wont ever love me, to know ill always be close to her heart. to truly understand what iv never had.
all of this in the moment she looked at me.
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for nicole oke. shes a wonderful person. should have been writen long ago.

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:iconrizahgirl56:
ha ha nice is this oen of ur ex's?

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I am the Light. The Light is within me. The Light surrounds me. The Light protects me. I am the Light
:iconrizahgirl56:
Seriously its really well written great job Eric!

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I am the Light. The Light is within me. The Light surrounds me. The Light protects me. I am the Light
:iconnashobanowa625:
This is very well written. I can feel the emotion and the praise in this.

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X~Nur Gott allein kann mich verurteilen~X

First rule of Jazz band, don't talk about Jazz band.

"Come to the dark side, we have cookies"
"Ew they're stale!"
"damn......."
:iconshadowofsweetwords:
no its of nicole the rose that posions me with poetry.
:iconrizahgirl56:
uhh rose HUH????

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I am the Light. The Light is within me. The Light surrounds me. The Light protects me. I am the Light
:iconnashobanowa625:
np, you gf is wondering where you are

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X~Nur Gott allein kann mich verurteilen~X

First rule of Jazz band, don't talk about Jazz band.

"Come to the dark side, we have cookies"
"Ew they're stale!"
"damn......."
:iconshadowofsweetwords:
yea its a realy long story

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